Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Exquisite Corps Crit

For last project, my main critiques were that I needed to represent my platforms within my floor plan. And better represent where my stairs were as well. 

But overall, the hard work I put into representing this project I feel worked really well. 



Though the site I choose was ultimately challenging in figuring out exactly how the space would be in plan, I was able to grasp a good understanding of it, which allowed me to create the space I did. When I translated the caption of the Piranesi drawing and it said that the Rotunda would be used for theatrical presentations that was what ultimately sold me on using this location. Since I wanted to use my space as some type of performance area, it worked perfectly. 

If I could have added another collage to my presentation I would have looked into creating a view as if we were standing in the rotunda looking to where I had the entrance. That would have allowed the platforms to be represented even better and show the relationship they had to the overall space. 

Ultimately I am very happy about how this project came out, but of course there is usually always more one could do to better a project. 

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