So after crit on Wednesday, I feel as though it went rather well. Though there are always the general "next step" comments as I call them. What one could do to push the project a little further. For me personally, what I was told was to break my boxes out of the footprint. So to stagger them more both in plan and section as it was like a "pancake". The other thought by the guest critic Samantha was to keep the idea I had of moving the stairs from interior to exterior and execute that more. So to make the connection of my different blocks with stairs that to are on the outside, and a lot of them!
Samantha also commented on my axon drawing, which I was very pleased to hear because that drawing took a lot of time! And I had to make sure I had ALL the lines this time. Also the wire drawing was rather difficult to take a picture of, but you can kind of get the image of it here. Looks much better in person.
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